Taking It Outside

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For the first time this summer (!), I've been able to take my netbook outside for some sunny Sunday writing. Sitting outside seems like a good idea to writers, but isn't necessarily as user-friendly as it first appears. There are some ways around this, however...

Sunshade
You'll need to buy a nice big movable sunshade to stand next to your table. This will keep your screen and your shoulders nicely covered, which means you'll be able to see the words on your monitor and avoid sunburn. Nice!

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You won't want your computer to die mid-scene, so trail something long and white out of an open window. 

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I have an ancient piece of wood that I drag out to place across my garden table. Not the most sophisticated of writing surfaces, but it allows my wireless mouse to work and stops the netbook from wobbling about.

Cushions
Garden furniture isn't really meant for long periods of work, so take a couple of cushions out with you to avoid sore bums.

The Right Type Of Work
This may be the most important detail to consider. What are you going to be writing? A dreamy first draft where you're just exploring your story? An intense re-write to a deadline? A synopsis? Tackling copyedits? Some work will be able to move outside, some is more of a challenge. My inner city outside workplace enjoys the constant calls of over-excited inner city kids getting their hit of sunshine - it's not quiet. Hayfever can send your nose running and then there's the constant call of a plant that needs trimming or some washing to pin out on the line. Choose your work carefully!

After that, enjoy the sensation of a breeze through your hair, spiders crawling across your keyboard and grass tickling your toes. Writers don't get much of this in the UK - make the most of it!




The Competitive Edge

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It was London Book Fair a couple of weeks ago. Remember when the sun used to shine? 

Below is a photo of the International Rights Centre. You won't get past the heavy security here unless you have a booked meeting and a good reason to take up agents' time:

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Sell, sell, sell!

Elsewhere, things may be a tad more friendly:

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But if all the hard-nosed business and sense of sharp competition makes you come out in a sweat, don't worry about visiting London Book Fair or other similair trade events in Bolgona or Frankfurt. No visit is cheap and author purses can often be strained. 

There are much better things you can be doing with your time! Have you seen some of the awesome writer competitions out there right now?

  • Greenhouse Literary Agency is looking for humorous writers. You can read all the details of their Funny Prize here.

  • Macmillan Children's Books has launched a Write Now! competition for debut children's fiction.

  • Hot Keys has joined forces with The Guardian to find hot new (young) writing talent, details here.

Never has unagented writing talent been so openly courted by publishers! Looks like there's a way of circumnavigating the security at London Book Fair, after all. All you need is talent, time and application - so what are you waiting for?

That Damnable Middle Section

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I'm working on a second draft. It's going really well, though I did find myself stumbling to a halt as I encountered the beast known and feared by all writers - the middle section.

Almost every author in the world knows where they're starting and where they want to get to. Most will stumble on the way. So if this happens to you, the first thing to NOT do is berate yourself or panic. It's all part of the process - you know - tearing your hair out. Wondering what happens in between your staggering opening and earth shattering ending.

So, how did I stop myself panicking when I suddenly thought, 'This isn't working. I need a much better filling in my sandwich.'?

First off, I took a break to polish my pitch for this novel. I thought this might help focus my thoughts. And when I say 'polish' I mean 'write at all'. I have a big problem with pitches. They frighten me. Fortunately, I'd recently downloaded Nicola Morgan's latest ebook, 'Write A Great Synopsis, An Expert Guide'. In this ebook, there's a section on writing your 25-word pitch. If you ask me, Nicola's ebook is worth the £2.26 price for this advice alone. As it happens, it's full of sound advice for writing a synopsis, too!

So, my pitch kind of written (it needs more polish) I returned to the novel and did some thinking. I realised I needed something really important - a rival love interest. Or certainly a rival love interest who was much less of a wet rag than my current one. I went back to adjust a scene, wrote a new chapter, made notes about the way forwards and - hurrah! - panic avoided.

As it happens, another of Nicola's books - Write To Be Published - has a section on 'tight middles'. She advises a subplot or secondary conflict to get rid of saggy middles. Whaddyaknow? I'd inadvertently arrived at the same conclusion, bringing in a love interest to rack up the stakes for my main conflict. I think that's called a subplot.

So if you're struggling with a middle section, take some time out, give yourself a different (concrete) exercise to do with the novel, go and read some great writing guides - and possibly visit Twitter, where you will be surrounded by others wailing with author anguish. In the age of social networking, you no longer need to suffer alone. There are lots of people suffering alongside you!

Write A Novel, See The World


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Torquay, home of Agatha Christie

I've been away a lot recently with my writing. Last weekend I attended the Scattered Authors' Society annual conference in Peterborough. I spoke on one of the panels, trying and failing not to feel too overwhelmed by the number of inspiring children's authors collected in one room.

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There were several fabulous presentations, though the informal chats are just as important. It's all about being around peers and sharing experiences. After all, no one else knows what it's like to be on the roller coaster ride of an author's career other than another author. Take my advice - surround yourself by people who are doing the same as you.

Continuing this theme, I went away again this weekend on a writing retreat, to Torquay with three trusted friends. Oh my goodness, if you want to get some work under your belt, give yourself a shared schedule with other writers. Guilt, embarrassment and peer pressure are wonderful motivators! No way will you want to fritter away a day on Facebook.

But why do I bother with all of this? After all, these excursions involve train tickets, restaurant meals, time spent away from loved ones. Well, it helps me feel connected. It motivates me. Be it creative cross-pollination, or sharing industry notes, career discussions or simply having a laugh with friends, these things are important. Writing can be solitary. It can be agonising or ecstatic, and sometimes just boring. But none of these things really mean anything if you can't share. 

Most of all, when a deadline hoves into view, I want to feel inspired, and I get that from other people. I'm fizzing with inspiration right now, all because I got out of my office and caught a train. Who knows where the next stage in the journey will take me? Come on board!

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Photo taken on a morning run in Peterborough

Intervew With An Illustrator - Vanessa Cabban

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I have interviewed several children's authors, but now I'm thrilled to feature my first interview with a picture book illustrator. I first came across Vanessa Cabban through her knitting blog, Do You Mind If I Knit. I quickly became aware of her other highly original creative pursuits, including her beautiful papier mache sculptures. I'm now determined to commission a sculpture from Vanessa should I ever have a book deal worth celebrating!

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One of Vanessa's beautiful sculptures

Vanessa also illustrates picture books. Truly, a Rennaissance woman! So I'm delighted to welcome her to my author blog to hear some of her words of wisdom on a topic that is truly mysterious to me and my clumsy fingers: drawing and illustrating. Vanessa's latest picture book is A Secret Worth Sharing with Walker Books and she kindly agreed to chat about it here.

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Welcome, Vanessa! At which point during the telling of the picture book story do you become involved? Are you sent a finished script, or do you have input at the writing stage?

The point I become involved is when the publisher sends me the finished text. I say "finished", but in my experience a text will often change as problems with the pacing or certain words become apparent as I illustrate it. Sometimes text has to be shortened too, which authors hate. In the latest book I'm working on, I came up with the concept, and then it was handed over to the author Jeanne Willis to write up, that's as far as I've ever been involved at the writing stage.

How do you judge the interpretation of text on each spread? My impression is that you don't literally illustrate the words on the page, but give another view of the scene. For example, there's no sun like a 'bright golden coin' on the first spread. (Though, interestingly, that sun does feature on the previous spread, the title page!)

The very first thing I do when illustrating a text is establish the characters by doing lots of drawings. I like to explore the characters' personalities through drawing and thinking about them. This can take a bit of time, but it's essential, because it will make all the difference in the illustrating of the text. Authors don't give details of the characters personalities in their texts, I have to look at what the characters say and embroider a story for each of them, which I work in to the drawings of each character. When I'm illustrating a text, I don't want to "repeat" the text in the illustrations, I want to say something that relates to the text but doesn't repeat it, I must sum up the flavour of the text, but add something extra that isn't necessarily said in the text. It would be a very boring book if all the illustrations did was to copy exactly what the text was saying.

One of the things that illustrators have to contend with and get around is often the piling up of several disparate factors in a scene. The first spread has the scene set in woodland, but there is also mention of the sun. The way I resolved this was to set the scene with the sun in the sky, in the previous two spreads, and then plunge in to the woodland on the first spread, where the sun is seen in the light glinting through the leaves. This is a perfect example of not illustrating a text in such a way that the words are being copied in pictures, but taking the illustrations to a level where they compliment and enhance the text, and make for a book that is visually interesting.


How did you come to the decision to have spreads with four horizontal panels?

The four horizontal panels is a device that is used in all the mole books, and it is a way to express actions. It also helps to break up the pages of full spreads that run through the book. I think of it in terms of a film, if a whole film was conducted without any close ups or change of viewpoint, it would become quite tedious to look at.


What are Walker like to work with and how did you come to them?

I approached Walker Books with some images of my work, and was asked for an interview to show my portfolio. There were a few people who crowded round the table, and to be honest, most of them looked thoroughly bored and openly disinterested, EXCEPT for one person alone, Vanessa Clarke, who commissioned me to work on two books I wrote. To this day, I am very thankful that Vanessa Clarke was at that interview; if she hadn't been there I wouldn't be working with Walker Books today. 

My experience of working with Walker Books, (who are highly respected, and every author and illustrator wants to work with them), is one where, as a team, we are all striving to produce the best book possible. We all work very hard, and I like this. My best books are the ones I have created with Walker. They never have to encourage me to work harder as I am very passionate about giving my utmost to create a good book. I can honestly say that I love working with the team at Walker Books. I have been working with Julia Thompson and Denise Johnstone Burt for many years, and I hope it carries on that way for a long time.


How does book illustration dovetail with your other artistic pursuits? I know you have a successful career as a papier mache artist and also as a card illustrator, and most recently, a jewellery maker!

Before the recession hit, everything I did outside of book illustration was a hobby. When the recession came along, and started to devastate the publishing industry, I was still getting work as an illustrator, but it was reduced. Whilst this led to a period of great worry, it made me reassess things, I needed to find another avenue to make a living rather than relying solely on illustration, I needed to diversify! I had always wanted to take the sculpture to a level other than it being a hobby but had never had the time to do it, and for the first time, I had the time to do this. I also found a certain freedom in making the sculptures, I wasn't part of a team when making them, it was all my own decision, and I enjoyed this. I actually enjoy working in a team of people when making my books, infact a team is essential to the success of a book, but having a taste of the opposite (working entirely on my own), was also enjoyable. I've found that my background as a commercial artist has worked particularly well with regard to doing commissions, my lack of ego makes me want to do the best I can for a client, I am never thinking about what I want, other than wanting to do the best I can for them. 

The jewellery is something I have secretly been working on for many years, in different forms. It started with some very intricate beaded pieces, then developed to very sculptural crochet works. At the moment I am integrating my papier mache work in to my jewellery, with some interesting results. A necklace I made for Fliss, of blog Joshy and Belle, where she was very descriptive of what she wanted, has actually led to a new direction in my jewellery. I like to think this is proof that laying the ego aside, and being open to suggestion can lead to very interesting developments in work. Fliss commissioned me to make a necklace even though I had no track record of making a necklace like the one I made for her, she was absolutely determined I could do it, had absolute faith in me, so I have to say that is all thanks to Fliss that my jewellery has taken the new path it has taken.


Could you tell us a little bit about the medium you work in?

With regards to my illustration work, I use paper and watercolour paints, two very traditional mediums. I've been asked about working on a computer, but I find that the pencil and watercolours serve me well enough. Maybe if I was exposed to drawing on the computer I would get hooked. I find that there is nothing quite like the simple pencil and brush to work with.

With regards to the sculptures and jewellery, I use a glorious mishmash of materials, but the main components are lots of different types of paper according to the stage I'm at in a sculpture, and I'm increasingly using clay, then out come the fabrics, paints, and embroidery threads. I don't like using found objects or props in my work, I like to make every component. For instance If there is a chair or umbrella or tiny lamp, I have to make it, it all has to have my stamp on it. Once I received a comment on my blog asking where I'd managed to find the spade the Hare I made, was leaning on, that gave me great pleasure, because I made it myself, and the lady had thought the handle was real wood, isn't that marvellous!

Thank you so much, lovely lady! Vanessa is an amazingly talented woman and you can buy her scultptures and cards from her Etsy shop or her latest picture book here. Excitingly, Vanessa has three pieces in an exhibition at the Society of Scottish Artists in Glasgow and later this year will have a solo exhibition at The Mansfield Park Gallery, also in Glasgow. After that? I can't wait to see what she does next!

Turning Three, Turning Discovered

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Along with 13 writers, 6 illustrators, 3 other editors, one panel of judges, a book packager (WP) and a voluntary organisation (SCBWI-UK) I am taking this weekend to recover. On Thursday evening I shook hands, kissed, hugged, grinned, chatted, exchanged business cards - and tip-toed home in the wet snow, carrying piles of books and one very special mug:

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This mug was a gift from the Undiscovered Voices 2012 writers. There was one each for the four members of the organising committee. It really is the small things in life that count. For me, this mug sums up quite how deserving our latest collection of writers are. As they sat at the centre of a quite remarkable storm, they remembered to do something to say thank you. 

And yes, it has been a perfect storm. The third Undiscovered Voices Anthology has taken off in a remarkable manner. This innovation always managed to change careers and lives since its inception. The difference now is that people are watching, and cheering from the outset. If ever author or illustrator success could be engineered from the sheer force of industry goodwill, then it will be over the coming months.

Some highlights of the evening for me:

  • Listening to Richard Masson joke about taking 15 years to become an overnight success.
  • Being handed Sharon Jones's awesome new business card, which even carries her pitch line: 'Poppy knew jealousy could tear you apart. She didn't realise it could get you killed.'*
  • Hearing Malorie Blackman recreate her victory SCREECH when publication first came her way.
  • Dragging innumerable editors and agents over to meet wide-eyed authors, who seemed to think my, ahem, chutzpa was, ahem, entertaining.
  • Watching the photographers capture every single moment.
  • Meeting friends, old and new.
  • Seeing the authors and illustrators thoroughly enjoy their time to shine.

* I seriously need to think about the pitch line for my latest novel!

Now, we hand over to other people. Agents. Publishers. We sit back and watch - though I'm not sure we'll have to do much waiting to celebrate news.

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What an experience! What friends I've made! What are your favourite memories from the evening?

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The three other women who kept me sane!

To Everything (Turn, Turn, Turn)
There is a season (Turn, Turn, Turn)
And a time to every purpose, under Heaven
Turn! Turn! Turn!, The Byrds

Getting Out Of The House

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Getting out of the house is one of the best things you can do as a writer. At home, there can be too many domestic distractions - and food! - on hand to take you away from the work. Oh, I'll just put a load in the washing machine. Oh, now the washing needs hanging out. Wasn't there a packet of jammie dodgers at the back of the cupboard? It can be disastrous for your productivity and your waist line.

But finding a good place to go and work is the holy grail of the author community. You want somewhere warm, with desk space, toilet facilities and food on hand. You don't want it to be too noisy or to feel obliged to leave after an hour or so. Hmmmm. Know anywhere like that? Libraries can be good, so are some cafes. (If you have any top tips for writer-friendly cafes do post a comment!) Myself? I paid the £45 for membership at the Royal Festival Hall to access their private members bar with my netbook and a variety of supplies. Ah, yes. Supplies... What does the writer-in-the-street need close to hand to enable Factor Ten Productivity? Here are my tips.

Drink of choice
Very important, this one. I stop at Starbucks on the way in to get my extra hot wet grande skinny latte. I get very grumpy in the mornings if I can't find one of these. This drink will take me through until lunch time at least. 

Food supplies
I tend to stock up ahead of time, rather than rely on the vastly over-priced food options available on the South Bank. I pick up a sarnie at M&S and some fruit. I try not to buy much more than that, because otherwise I will mindlessly graze in front of the netbook until I discover I've eaten my own body weight in chocolate covered raisins.

Wrap ups and peel offs
You can never tell how warm or cold you're going to feel, so I always take a wrap to put around my shoulders if needs me. I also sometimes take a pair of sandals to slip my feet into if my feet become too hot! (Or is that one just me?)

A dongle
If your venue of choice doesn't have access to free WiFi (the RFH does) you'll need a dongle for Internet research and guilty visits to social networking sites. I have a 3G dongle on a monthly direct debit of £8 and it's been a godsend. It's allowed me to be productive on trains, in train stations, in bars, hotels and beachside cafes. (Though I did once have to go and sit on a bench by the crazy golf in Mablethorpe once, because that's the only place my dongle could pick up a connection.)

White noise
Sometimes there will be a sudden, unwelcome spurt of noise from a group of schoolchildren, or a gathering of nannies or people just being obnoxious. It's a really good idea to have some White Noise or Sounds of Nature on your music device so that you can plug your (noise reduction) ear plugs in and blank out the outside world. There's a 'WhiteNoise' app you can download from your app store.

Notebook and pen
Sounds obvious, but sometimes easy to forget as you're packing up your bag. 

A solid bag
Ah yes, your bag. Get a really decent one for lugging all this stuff about in! I bought a leather satchel from The Cambridge Satchel Company. The good news is that this is tax deductible.

Netbook
I've found a netbook much easier to lug about than a heavy laptop. Two years ago I received an Eee PC 1008HA for Christmas and it has been used every day of my life since. Literally.

Wireless mouse
Just so that you're not clicking away on an annoying little box on your keyboard when moving about a document.

Extension lead
Sounds crazy, but I am thinking of tracking down a compact extension lead when I'm travelling. Too often, I've found that hotel rooms have few plugs in inaccessible places and I've ended up stretched across the corner of a bed, just in order to be able to type. If you have any recommendations, let me know.

That's it from me! All you or I need to do now is allow our words of gold to pour forth. Do you have any venues you can recommend for writing, or would you add anything else to the list of essential equipment for a writing foray?

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Counting Down To Christmas

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What does a writer do when she's between deadlines? Relax, that's what! For the past six weeks I've had the rare writer privilege of a break between commitments. It's been glorious and I've had lots of fun. I've sewn, I've knitted, I've met friends, I've gone away, I've exercised and I've had my weekends free. Oh, the luxury of 48 hours in which to do nothing but please myself! 

A couple of weeks ago I went to see David Nicholls at Book Slam give his last ever reading from One Day. A few days later, I caught the train to the Cambridge Literary Festival to join fellow author, Helen Moss*, for a day of literary entertainment and thinking. (Oh, and eating. And maybe a bit of drinking.) 

*Have you SEEN Helen's amazing website for her Adventure Island series of books?

But with Christmas just around the corner (and after that a whole new publishing year) it's time to click my heels and salute the scheduling sergeant major. Publishing Peeps are planning, which means meetings have been had and deadlines have re-appeared.

I'm not going to lie to you - I'm glad to be back in the swing of things. Writers get a bit twitchy after a few weeks of R&R. We need to feel needed!

So as the Christmas countdown gains speed, and festive publisher parties abound, I am trying to find the head space to think about other things. It's time to get serious, and as any seasoned author will tell you, Christmas isn't really a holiday for us. It's a big chunk of time in which we can get loads of writing done!

The truth is, schedules are another area of a writer's life over which we have little control. Make of that what you will - it can be a reason to complain or celebrate. Personally, I relish a deadline. And as Katie Dale and I celebrated via Twitter this week, no one needs to know what we look like when we sit at our writer desks. All we need to do is write...

Tuning in to the Discovery Channel

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The panel of judges on launch night

This year I've had the great honour of being on the organising committee for Undiscovered Voices 2012, along with Sara O'Connor, Sara Grant and Elizabeth Galloway. The planning started long ago, way back in 2009 when we'd meet regularly to discuss how the third anthology would work. Fast forward a year to an autumnal evening and our eight judges - including editors, agents, a bookseller and a literary scout - had gathered to decide on the 2012 Undiscovered Voices long list.

Want to know what happens on an Undiscovered Voices judging evening? Well, we could be sure from the out set that not everyone would agree. To begin, there was pleasant chat over refreshments, whilst everyone probably secretly yearned to get stuck into the nitty gritty of the selection process. Finally, people settled into their chairs clutching reams of paper. Everyone present knew which extracts had made them passionate and which they could see potential in. 

Sara Grant proceeded to do a highly professional and admirable job of steering the conversation. I and others made sure people's glasses remained filled and that extracts were easily on hand should judges need to refresh their memories. 

Then I sat back and watched, whilst keeping my lip firmly buttoned. (I wasn't allowed to influence the judges' decisions.) What did I witness? Voices raised? For sure. Arms flung into  the air? Certainly. Cries of incredulity or frowns of bemusement? Sometimes. But the one thing that made a very big impact on me was the passion. Not once did I hear an agent or an editor talk cynically about 'market demands', 'list requirements' or even 'trends'. Never, ever did I hear an extract dismissed because it wasn't working hard enough. If judges were discussing a piece of writing, it was because someone in the room liked it. If the corners of a diamond were a bit rough, I heard editors enthusiastically agree about how those corners could be smoothed. 

These were professionals engaging with a writer's craft and talent and bringing their own craft and talent to the table. I lapped it up. As we locked up the building at the end of the night, and made our way home by the amber glow of street lights, I marvelled at something new that Undiscovered Voices had done. It had reminded me that in these sometimes exhausted, sometimes trying and sometimes cynical times the professionals at the heart of our industry are there because they believe in and engage with story. For one blessed night, no one present had to answer to anyone other than themselves for what they wanted to see progress. No one had to consider a marketing strategy, or author promotability (they didn't know who the authors were!) or past sales figures. They just had to think about which stories they liked - and, let me tell you, there was a lot this panel of judges liked.

I'd always known that Undiscovered Voices helped authors' careers. I hadn't realized it helped editors, agents, booksellers and literary scouts shine their brightest, too. When authors struggle to achieve publication, it's an often-heard gripe that the powers-that-be are wilfully slamming doors in their faces. On the evidence of Undiscovered Voices, that simply isn't true. Undiscovered Voices is helping careers all over again. And we haven't even got to launch night yet...

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What's Frankfurt Book Fair Ever Done For You?

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What does Frankfurt Book Fair mean to the children's author in the street? Not as much as Bologna Book Fair - exclusively devoted to children's publishing - but it remains the largest trade fair of the year, and publishers from around the world are currently dragging their exhausted behinds from meeting to meeting, catching up with old friends and colleagues, holding a finger up to test the way the wind is blowing.

For many authors and editors this week usually heralds a blessed reprieve. When the cat's away, the mouse can get some decent work done. All the big wigs are in Germany, which means that no major meetings or decisions will be happening (unless at the Fair), deadlines can relax a little and the offices of publishing houses get a little quieter and much more productive.

Unless your manuscript becomes the 'Book of the Fair' (unlikely for most of us) you may not immediately see any difference after Frankfurt. But publishers often use these fairs to get a taste for how businesses are faring and what the latest fashion is. This year, the signs seem to be that people are buying and selling, despite the horrendous recession we're in the midst of. Rights people will soon be returning to their offices muttering ominously about dystopian being officially dead or science fiction being the latest new kid on the block. Acquisition meetings in the following months may start to shift in mood, and that's when authors could finally see the impact of a book fair. Publishing is horribly fickle -  our writing should never try to second guess the market.

If you're writing non-fiction, the end of Frankfurt may bring good news with it. Hurrah - publisher A has sold coedition rights to publisher B, which means the print run can actually go ahead and you will actually be commissioned to turn that proposal into a real book.

But by and large, my author message about book fairs would be leave it to the professionals. Keep your head down and let the rights people sell rights, the agents champion their authors, the publishers decide what we'll all be reading over the next few years. When it's your turn to be involved in the process, people will let you know. Don't worry about feeling left out; trade fairs are distinctly unglamorous. Just be ready to react when people need you to. After all, the agent in the toilet queue who gets chatting to the publisher who admires her dress may strike up a lovely new professional contact that sees your book being sold. Everybody out there is making friends. And these are people who may one day want to be your friend, too.